My 8 year old could write a better letter.
The very first sentence makes no since and the remainder of this missive is riddled with spelling error, grammatical mistake, run-on sentences, syntax errors, and improper punctuation.
The recipient(s) must think you're an uneducated, alcoholic, nut job. Or perhaps, English is your second language?
I was forwarded this link from a friend after I asked for a letter I could send to a collection agency.
This letter is terrible - I can't believe it wasn't proof read before you mailed it out, and more importantly, you posted it for others.
I know this is harsh, but this web site seems to be informational and instructive. If you want to offer a letter to send to a professional business, it better be written professionally.
BTW, the grammer and spelling contained in most of the posts on this thread are equally dreadful.
Are most adults this illiterate ?