I started using a similar letter starting back in december.
So far I have had 3 items removed from each of the big 3 CRA's
and just received a letter from another one saying they have no record of that account and will have it deleted.
Another 1 I have problems with because they verified the 1-2 punch while it was in validation stages.
The 1-2 punch for those that dont know is you validate a Credit reporting agency but not an OC Original creditor.
They are prohibited from professional collection activiy while it is in validation..so as soon as you get the return receipt back from the certified letter you send..
You have already prepared the letter disputing it with the credit reporting agency.
You send that out the same day or the next day you get the return receipt back.
That way they cant verify and it is deleted.
You only have to win once, they have to win everytime.
If they do verify they are in violation of the fdcpa and the FCPA.
From there you send off a request for a procedural request to the CRA and find out exactly how they verified it.
Send another stern letter to the CA (collection agency) giving them 15 days to delete it and if they dont...let the complaints to the state and federal agencies fly.
Give it another 30-60 days...if no response...SUE THEM.
They are liable for 1000 dollars for each violation of each act.
Dont accept a partial validation..I cant tell you how many I have received with a computer printout.
If they do not do a full validation within 30 days then they are legally required to delete it.
I have a feeling I will be going into a court battle with the one that verified (and they did send a partial validation) after the 30 days even.
They have violated my rights 3 or 4 times and my suit will say as much.